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Write a letter to your manager about your work from last year. Include: what you did, what you think you could improve, a training request

Respected Devendar Sir, I am writing in response to your request for the annual self appraisal report. Since 1 year, I am handling one project for our local client. I accomplished all the desire of client which boost up my confidence level. Frequently I suggest them plethora of advanced designs on their project that could lead their business at aristocratic. I am a good web designer though want to acquire knowledge of recent bootstrap language. Furthermore, I want to suggest you about one webinar which will be organized by renowned IT head in which all contents will be included. Hence, we can grow up in IT sector quickly and efficiently which aid us to step up in foreign industry. I know you are generous and supportive in all kind of work. Therefore, I request you to join me this webinar for 3 days. It would create significant effect on me as well as our company. I expect an affirmative reply from you. Please let me know at your earliest as I have only two days left for registration.
Respected
Devendar
Sir,

I am writing in response to your request for the annual self appraisal report.

Since 1 year, I am handling one project for our local client. I accomplished all the desire of client which boost up my confidence level.
Frequently
I suggest them plethora of advanced designs on their project that could lead their business at aristocratic.

I am a
good
web designer though want to acquire knowledge of recent bootstrap language.
Furthermore
, I want to suggest you about one webinar which will
be organized
by renowned IT head in which all contents will
be included
.
Hence
, we can grow up in IT sector
quickly
and
efficiently
which aid us to step up in foreign industry.

I know you are generous and supportive in all kind of work.
Therefore
, I request you to
join
me this webinar for 3 days. It would create significant effect on me
as well
as our
company
.

I
expect
an affirmative reply from you.
Please
let
me know at your earliest as I have
only
two days
left
for registration.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager about your work from last year. Include: what you did, what you think you could improve, a training request

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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