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Write a letter to a storekeeper to send few books

Hope this letter find you in best of your mood and health. Based on the information available over the website (www. bbok. com) and column in the newspaper(Times Global, dated 10th Jan) about the sale on the books during this festive season. I am interested in buying: a)The Basic of Taxb)Global Accountingc)Ledger As, I am aware the discount of these books are 25% on MRP, based on my calculation the Total summation will be be INR 1500 with Taxes. Since, I am a Banking employee and wanted to keep myself updated with the current changes into my domain, I presume that this discounting period will be an added advantage for ne to learn in a pocket friendly manner. If you suggest, I can send a Demand draft favoring your company name or if you can advise me with you banking details, so that I can transfer the amount via NEFT. Once you receive the amount in your Bank, after that you can send me the asked books via General courier choosing "Payment by Receiver", option so that no liability on you related to the sending of books to me. Looking forward for your reply and healthy engagement with you. Thanks
Hope this letter find you in best of your mood and health. Based on the information available over the website (
www
.
bbok
.
com
) and column in the newspaper(Times Global, dated 10th Jan) about the sale on the
books
during this festive season. I
am interested
in buying: a
)
The Basic of
Taxb
)
Global
Accountingc
)
Ledger As, I am aware the discount of these
books
are 25% on MRP, based on my calculation the Total summation will
be be
INR 1500 with Taxes. Since, I am a Banking employee and wanted to
keep
myself updated with the
current
changes
into my domain, I presume that this discounting period will be an
added
advantage for
ne
to learn in a pocket friendly manner. If you suggest, I can
send
a Demand draft favoring your
company
name or if you can advise me with you banking
details
,
so
that I can transfer the amount via NEFT. Once you receive the amount in your Bank, after that you can
send
me the asked
books
via General courier choosing
"
Payment by Receiver
"
, option
so
that no liability on you related to the sending of
books
to me. Looking forward for your reply and healthy engagement with you. Thanks
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a storekeeper to send few books

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
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