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You have just read an article in an International travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

You have just read an article in an International travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. byrX
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to address an inappropriate information I read on the International Express Guide for Traveller’s Magazine in the February 2021 issue. I, as a citizen of India, am elated to read about an article of my city Mumbai on an International platform. Firstly, thank you for featuring Mumbai in the top five best places to visit in India. All the features and tourist attractions mentioned in the article were accurate however when you stated that the traffic congestion in the city would demoralise any traveller to visit our city was demeaning and incorrect. Please verify from the right sources, our city has recently tackled the past issues of traffic by constructing infrastructure to curb the problem and been successful at it. It is of utmost importance for you to correct this misinformation printed on the magazine immediately as it would put a negative image of our city even for the ones wanting to travel to our city as your magazine is most sought after to refer and plan trips for avid travellers. It is my humble request to rewrite the article in the next month’s issue. I look forward to your cooperation in this matter Yours sincerely, Rachel
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to address
an inappropriate information
I read on the International Express Guide for
Traveller
’s Magazine in the February 2021 issue. I, as a citizen of India,
am elated
to read about an article of my city Mumbai on an International platform.

Firstly
, thank you for featuring Mumbai in the top five best places to visit in India. All the features and tourist attractions mentioned in the article were accurate
however
when you stated that the traffic congestion in the city would
demoralise
any
traveller
to visit our city was demeaning and incorrect.
Please
verify from the right sources, our city has recently tackled the past issues of traffic by constructing infrastructure to curb the problem and been successful at it.

It is of utmost importance for you to correct this misinformation printed on the magazine immediately as it would put a
negative
image of our city even for the ones wanting to travel to our city as your magazine is most sought after to refer and plan trips for avid
travellers
. It is my humble request to rewrite the article in the
next
month’s issue.

I look forward to your cooperation in this matter

Yours
sincerely
,

Rachel
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in an International travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
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