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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person KD3L
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writting to you because of this article in your newspaper. It was told that the newspaper is offering an award for the most useful person in our community and I know one person, who shoud get this award. His name is John Smith and he is my neightbor. From my point of view he did an excellent work last year. As you already know, our local community has a special web-site where all the people can describe all the issues they have and our goverment will help them to solve this problems. It is a unique application for our city and we are the only area that has it. John Smith is a creater of this web-service. However, as I know Jhe spend at least 200 dollars each months to support this web-site. In this case, I hope your newspaper will support John by giving him some money as a award. Faithfully you, Pavel Astapov
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am
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writting
to you
because of this
article in your newspaper. It was
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told
that the newspaper is offering an award for the most useful person in our community and I know one person, who
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shoud
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get
this award. His name is John Smith and he is my
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neightbor
. From my point of view he did an excellent work last year.

As you already know, our local community has a special web-site where all the
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people
can
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describe
all the issues they have and our
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goverment
will
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help
them to solve
Did you mean "these"?
this
problems. It is a unique application for our
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city and
we are the
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only
area that has it. John Smith is a
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creater
of this web-service.
However
, as I know
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Jhe
spend at least 200 dollars each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "month"?
months
to support this web-site.
In this case
, I hope your newspaper will support John by giving him
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some
money as
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a
award.

Faithfully
you,

Pavel
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Astapov
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

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  American English
5 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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