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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much You should write at least 150 words.

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much NDwd
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have recently been offered a teaching assistant position at your school, and I am really grateful for this opportunity. However I have to say that I cannot accept your invitation right now. I sincerely appreciate your time that you spent on looking at my curriculum vitae. I have heard about your school as a professional environment where the students could gain more experience and educational skills before. When I received your response email, I was extremely happy and grateful. However, I regret declining this chance because of my current work. I am already working as a full-time intern at an international school. This work makes me very happy because of having the opportunity of teaching Mathematics to kids. It is quite tiring sometimes, but the kids always make me feel energetic. Therefore, I find no other way but to decline your offer. I hope that in the near future, when my internship time finishes, I could be a part of your school. Thank you once again. Yours faithfully, Hien.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I have recently
been offered
a teaching assistant position at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
, and I am
really
grateful for this opportunity.
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However
I
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have to
say that I cannot accept your invitation right
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now
.

I
sincerely
appreciate your time that you spent on looking at my curriculum vitae. I have heard about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
as a professional environment where the students could gain more experience and educational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
. When I received your response email, I was
extremely
happy and grateful.

However
, I regret declining this chance
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because
of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
work. I am already working as a full-time intern at an international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. This work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
happy
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because
of having the opportunity of teaching Mathematics to kids. It is quite tiring
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
,
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but
the kids always
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make
me feel energetic.
Therefore
, I find no other way
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but
to decline your offer.

I hope that in the near future, when my internship time finishes, I could be a part of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. Thank you once again.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Hien
.
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IELTS letter You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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