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you are upset with a meal served at restaurant. write a letter to manager.

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my disappointment on meal was served at your hospital last week. I stopped by to see how my sister was doing after operation. She was given unhealthy food such as chips, fried potatoes and drinks like Pepsi and so on. Besides it, food was provided on dirty tray which is not good for hygiene and the nurse who provides food does not wear gloves. However, after operation she could have been given healthy food with more protein instead, such as chicken breast, beef, vegetables and naturally squeezed fruit juice in order to get recovered soon. And that would be awesome if everyone working there uses disposable gloves since hospitals have lots of frequently touched areas which in this case it is very vital, I think. I hope everything whatever I mentioned will be taken into consideration and effective changes will be implemented soon. I am just asking this for the sake of all patients. Yours faithfully, Ughur Gasimov

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my disappointment on meal was served
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stopped
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see
 how my sister was doing after operation.

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given
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food
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so
 on. Besides
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food
was provided
 on dirty tray which is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for hygiene and the nurse who provides You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 does not wear gloves.

However
, after operation she could have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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food
 with more protein instead
, such as chicken breast, beef, vegetables and naturally
 squeezed fruit juice in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 recovered This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. And that would be awesome if everyone working there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 disposable gloves since hospitals have lots of frequently
 touched areas which in this case
 it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 vital, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
.

I hope everything whatever I mentioned will be taken
 into consideration and effective This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 will be implemented
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 asking this for the sake of all patients.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Uighur
Ughur
Possible spelling mistake found.Asimov
Gasimov