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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter give details of what was wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter give details of what was wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take y0LP
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain you about the difficulties faced by me due to the non-functioning of the air-conditioning system during my stay at your hotel last week. Let me explain to you the situation in detail. At the time of check-in, I was allotted a room with a faulty cooling system. I realized that there is a water leakage in the air-conditioner when my luggage got wet because of the water leaked from the air-conditioner. I immediately informed the house-keeping staff about the same. He assured me that it would be resolved shortly. However, the issue was not resolved by the end of the day. Due to this, I had to shift to another hotel as there were no vacant room available in this hotel. This resulted into an additional cost for me. I would urge you to refund me the charges paid to you for booking of hotel as I didn't stay there due to the issue in the air-conditioner. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Moeez Sabuwala.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain you about the difficulties faced by me due to the non-functioning of the air-conditioning system during my stay at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
last week.

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Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
to you the situation in detail. At the time of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
-in, I
was allotted
a room with a faulty cooling system. I realized that there is a water leakage in the air-conditioner when my luggage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
wet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the water leaked from the air-conditioner. I immediately informed the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
-keeping staff about the same. He assured me that it would
be resolved
shortly.

However
, the issue was not resolved by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the day. Due to this, I had to shift to another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
as there were no vacant room available in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
. This resulted into an additional cost for me.

I would urge you to refund me the charges paid to you for booking of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
as I didn't stay there due to the issue in the air-conditioner.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Moeez
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Sabuwala
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IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter give details of what was wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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179 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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