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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options. N7Ed
Hi Hari, How are you. Hope your'e doing great and how is life going. Recently I have been quite swamped with work. So I thought I could take a break by going for a short trip and decided visiting your home town would be awesome, as it was always my childhood dream. Regarding the travel plans, I am coming alone and planned to reach Ooty on November 2nd, Saturday of next week. I would be halting for 5 days and I would be delighted if you would accompany me. I have already scheduled a taxi to pick me up from airport and drop at Hotel madission which is only 2 minutes walking distance from your house. As you already know that I am interested in sightseeing that includes Dams, Museums, Wildlife Sanctuary; I have listed few places to explore like Ooty lake view, Seven hills, Zoo, Top slip, Dodabetta sucide point, Pykara dam. Also, I wanted to confirm if these would be open now. Moreover I am visiting Ooty for the first time, you could also suggest tourist spots that are extraordinary, adding a feast to the eye. Additonally, suggest me for the clothing accessories also. Looking forward to hearing back from you in the near future. Best Wishes, Renuka
Hi
Hari
, How are you. Hope your'e doing great and how is life going. Recently I have been quite swamped with work.
So
I
thought
I could take a break by going for a short trip and decided visiting your home town would be awesome, as it was always my childhood dream. Regarding the travel plans, I am coming alone and planned to reach
Ooty
on November 2nd, Saturday of
next
week. I would be halting for 5 days and I would
be delighted
if you would accompany me. I have already scheduled a taxi to pick me up from airport and drop at Hotel
madission
which is
only
2 minutes walking distance from your
house
.

As you already know that I
am interested
in sightseeing that includes Dams, Museums, Wildlife Sanctuary; I have listed few places to explore like
Ooty
lake view, Seven hills, Zoo, Top slip,
Dodabetta
sucide
point,
Pykara
dam.
Also
, I wanted to confirm if these would be open
now
.

Moreover
I am visiting
Ooty
for the
first
time, you could
also
suggest tourist spots that are extraordinary, adding
a feast to the eye
.
Additonally
, suggest me for the clothing accessories
also
.

Looking forward to hearing back from you in the near future.

Best Wishes,
Renuka
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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