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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an english- speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what is wrong with the furniture, say what action you would like the landlord to take.

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an english- speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what is wrong with the furniture, say what action you would like the landlord to take. moA8
Dear Mr. Smith, I am Jyoti Dahiya live in flat 21, north road, highway. I am living with my family in one of your rented flat from last 5 months. I am here to tell you my dissatisfaction regarding the condition of certain of the furniture. I am having issue with one of the chair of dinning table as leg to that chair is broken from the starting only. Another thing is bed, it creates so much noise when ever any one move while siting or laying on that. Due to that some time we were not able to sleep. Finally, one of handles out of five of the dressing table is broken. I had analyses the total cost required to there replacement and mentenance would be approx $180. Now it is totaly up to you whether you want to compensate or you be send some one to do these work. But I request you to take the action as really as possible because that is urgent. I look forward for your reply. Your Truly, Jyoti Dahiya
Dear Mr. Smith, I am
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Jyoti
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Dahiya
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in flat 21, north road, highway. I am living with my family in one of your rented flat from last 5 months. I am here to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you my dissatisfaction regarding the condition of certain of the furniture.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am having issue with one of the chair of dinning table as leg to that chair
is broken
from the starting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
. Another thing
is bed
, it creates
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much noise when ever any one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
while siting or laying on that. Due to that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time we were not able to sleep.
Finally
, one of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
handles
out of five of the dressing table
is broken
. I had analyses the total cost required to there replacement and
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mentenance
would be approx $180.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
it is
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totaly up
to you whether you want to compensate or you be
Consider using a past participle here: "sent".
send
Did you mean "someone"?
some one
to do these work.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I request you to take the action as
really
as possible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
that is
urgent. I look forward for your reply. Your
Truly
,
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Jyoti
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Dahiya

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an english- speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what is wrong with the furniture, say what action you would like the landlord to take.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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