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You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the training course you want to do • explain what the company could do to help you • say how the course will be useful for your job

You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the training course you want to do • explain what the company could do to help you • say how the course will be useful for your job 8RkP

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to bring to your knowledge about the training course titled “Global marketing access” advertised in Hindustan Times. I would like to seek your permission to participate in this program. The training program will take place from 20 September to 23 September in Mumbai in Radisson Hotel. The cost of attending the seminar inclusive of the hotel and meal is Rs 3000. Some of the well-known experts in international marketing around the world to speak on marketing and how to have a global reach. I would like to request you to kindly provide me with the necessary approvals, documentation, and email confirmations for attending the training session in Mumbai. Since our company is planning to expand globally and to have the global market of our product it will benefit with high customer retention and growth and moreover, the company will earn long term profits The training program will enrich my knowledge and expertise, furthermore, it will answer many of my questions such as how to have a global reach? how to promote the product internationally? How to attract customers? Clearly, it will aid me not only in my professional life but also in building a successful career I hope you will grant me permission to attend the training session in Mumbai and if you could consider reimbursing the amount spend for attending the training program. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely

Dear Sir,

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Yours sincerely