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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Mrs. Gupta I am a new resident in 159 apartment, shifted three days ago. I am planning to hold a house warming party on coming sunday and would like to invite you and take your permission for the noises that may be produced during the event. My name is a Sneha, and I moved in to this new home with my family. this week. We are family of 4 members, a couple (me and my husband) and 2 kids. My husband recently got job in Sandyford business park, therefore we have to relocate from Mayo to Dublin. We already have many friends and acquaintances here in Dublin, so we are planning to throw a small party-cum get-together on the coming Sunday. The party will start early in the evening at around 6 o'clock and will finish by 10 o'clock in the night, considering that the next day is a working one. Since all of my friends have kids of different age groups, the party will be full of children noises, and I apologize for that in advance. I would like to invite you along with your family to be a part of our get-together. This will help us to know each other well as neighbours and grow the bond as friends too. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Regards Sneha Chawla
Dear Mrs. Gupta

I am a new resident in 159 apartment, shifted three days ago. I am planning to hold a
house warming
party on coming
sunday
and would like to invite you and take your permission for the noises that may
be produced
during the
event
.

My name is a
Sneha
, and I
moved
in to this new home with my family.
this
week. We are family of 4 members, a couple (me and my husband) and 2 kids. My husband recently
got
job in
Sandyford
business park,
therefore
we
have to
relocate from Mayo to Dublin.

We already have
many
friends and acquaintances here in Dublin,
so
we are planning to throw a
small
party-cum
get
-together on the coming Sunday. The party will
start
early in the evening at around 6 o'clock and will finish by 10 o'clock in the night, considering that the
next
day is a working one. Since all of my friends have kids of
different
age groups, the party will be full of children noises, and I apologize for that in advance.

I would like to invite you along with your family to be a part of our
get
-together. This will
help
us to know each other well as
neighbours
and grow the bond as friends too.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Regards

Sneha
Chawla
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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