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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear Mandar, I got your message you are moving to my city. I am very happy about your decision and you get a good job in the city. It Is one of the highest payroll job. As your company’s office is in the downtown and you will be working there, so, I will suggest you to contact with global properties they have good apartments there and I can talk with them on your behalf. As, this is a small town so transportation time is less even if you walk it takes hardly 10-15 minutes from one place to another place from mostly part of the city. If you do cab to go from one part to other part of the city the maximum cab charges are $12. The most interesting part of the city is the lakes and trails which have good scenes specially during summer’s time. After every month, we have a small get-to-gather with the friends and you can join us where you can find new friends. I am looking forward for you. Lots of Love Samarpreet

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