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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.  In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Dear Tom, Hope you’re doing well. I’m delighted to hear from you, that you’re coming to my place during my vacations to handle some essential chores and my dog. I’m planning to visit Melbourne for one month and I’d booked ‘The Hilton Castle’. During my stay at hotel, you can call me anytime on my Whats app or e-mail me as the hotel will provide me an access to the internet. Do you remember my dog’s name? He loves skimmed milk, especially biscuits in the milk and he need to be fed twice a day. Don’t worry! he is very calm and friendly in fact you’ll enjoy his company. Please keep in mind to water the plants everyday kept in a balcony and empty the bins from the kitchen as well, because the garbage collector van usually comes once in a week. I’d already subscribed the Netflix for you. Enjoy! I promise, will buy some souvenirs for you. Thanks once again! With love, Arshdeep
Dear Tom,

Hope you’re doing well. I’m delighted to hear from you, that you’re coming to my place during my vacations to handle
some
essential chores and my dog. I’m planning to visit Melbourne for one month and I’d booked ‘The Hilton Castle’.

During my stay at hotel, you can call me anytime on my
Whats app
or e-mail me as the hotel will provide me
an access
to the internet. Do you remember my dog’s name? He
loves
skimmed milk,
especially
biscuits in the
milk and
he
need
to
be fed
twice a day. Don’t worry!
he
is
very
calm and friendly in fact you’ll enjoy his
company
.

Please
keep
in mind to water the plants
everyday
kept
in a balcony and empty the bins from the kitchen
as well
,
because
the garbage collector van
usually
comes
once in a week. I’d already subscribed the Netflix for you. Enjoy! I promise, will
buy
some
souvenirs for you.

Thanks once again!

With
love
,

Arshdeep
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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