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Write an email to the restaurant’s manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things State what problem you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction

Hi Manager, I am a regular customer to La'Risote restaurant and have been visiting from almost 10 years now. I was a big fan of farm fresh pizza served in your restaurant and I have recommended the same to many of my friends, but last Saturday I din't have best of my experience. The crust of the pizza which I ordered was overcooked and the base was really thick, it spoiled our mood completely and we left the food. Also, the service was really slow, we almost waited for over an hour. First of all, I suggest that your chief chef must ensure that the base for all Pizzas served should be of consistent thickness that would help in baking pizza evenly and of same standards. Regarding long wait time, it can be reduced if you can start taking online booking through mobile applications, with advancements in technologies restaurant reservations system has also improved drastically which will definitely result in satisfied customer. I request you to take my suggestions strongly which will help La'Risote to gain the same level of standards as it used to have few years back. Yours Thankfully John
Hi Manager,

I am a regular customer to La'
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Risote
restaurant and have been visiting from almost 10 years
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now
. I was a
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big
fan of farm fresh pizza served in your restaurant and I have recommended the same to
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many
of my friends,
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but
last Saturday I
Did you mean “didn’t”?
din't
have best of my experience. The crust of the pizza which I ordered
was overcooked
and the base was
really
thick, it spoiled our mood
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
completely and
we
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left
the food.
Also
, the service was
really
slow, we almost waited for over an hour.

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.
First of all
, I suggest that your chief chef
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
ensure that the base for all Pizzas served should be of consistent thickness that would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in baking pizza
evenly
and of same standards. Regarding long wait time, it can be
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reduced
if you can
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start
taking online booking through mobile applications, with advancements in technologies restaurant reservations system has
also
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improved
drastically
which will definitely result in satisfied customer.

I request you to take my suggestions
strongly
which will
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help
La'
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Risote
to gain the same level of standards as it
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used
to have few years back.

Yours
Thankfully


John

IELTS letter Write an email to the restaurant’s manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things State what problem you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction

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  American English
5 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
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