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ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Mr. Venkata, I am writing this to ask for a few leaves from the work. I am pursuing a Master's degree in Business Administration from Gujarat University. As going towards the end of qualifying, I will have to demonstrate projects, submit assignments, and prepare for the final examination. Thus, I would like to request a week off from the work. As far as my work is concerned, I will be available to receive any urgent work calls and read the emails all the time. I have already talked to Harshil, who agreed to take up the priority tasks. Also, I assure you to start my day earlier than usual to complete my pending work as soon as I am back to work. I will make sure the company or the work will not get affected by my time off, in fact with this qualification will add skills to my current job. Having a degree in Business Administration will inculcate managerial skills. Later, I can not only work as a software engineer and develop websites but also manage team and host meetings in a well-organized way. I would be grateful if you can grant me leaves for my graduation. Looking forward to a positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Ishita
Dear Mr.
Venkata
,

I am writing this to
ask for
a few
leaves
from the
work
. I am pursuing a Master's degree in Business Administration from Gujarat University. As going towards the
end
of qualifying, I will
have to
demonstrate projects, submit assignments, and prepare for the final examination.
Thus
, I would like to request a week off from the work.

As far as my
work
is concerned
, I will be available to receive any urgent
work
calls and read the emails all the time. I have already talked to
Harshil
, who
agreed
to take up the priority tasks.
Also
, I assure you to
start
my day earlier than usual to complete my pending
work
as
soon
as I am back to
work
. I will
make
sure the
company
or the
work
will not
get
affected
by my time off, in fact with this qualification will
add
skills
to my
current
job.

Having a degree in Business Administration will inculcate managerial
skills
. Later, I can not
only
work
as a software engineer and develop websites
but
also
manage team and host meetings in a well-organized way. I would be grateful if you can grant me
leaves
for my graduation. Looking forward to a
positive
reply.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Ishita
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IELTS letter ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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