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Semi-formal You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about prices Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Mr. Hopwood, I am writing to find out more information about accommodations for rent available in your country. I am looking for a decent studio type apartment with a spectacular view of the city. I would love to consider if it has an ensuite kitchen and laundry, so it will be less hassle for me to wash my clothes during my stay. I would also appreciate it if you could help me find a place somewhere in the downtown area where I could have a walk at least to popular destinations around. My flight will be on 5th of March until the 8th. It will be a four days three night vacation including the travel time. According to my flight, I will be arriving at 12 noon. With that being said, I would need a settlement as well as a transportation arrangement. Kindly please send me a quotation regarding these services. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Janina Perez
Dear Mr.
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Hopwood
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I am writing to find out more information about accommodations for rent available in your country. I am looking for a decent studio type apartment with a spectacular view of the city.
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I
would
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love
to consider if it has an
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ensuite
kitchen and laundry,
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so
it will be less hassle for me to wash my clothes during my stay.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would
also
appreciate it if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me find a place somewhere in the downtown area where I could have a walk at least to popular destinations around. My flight will be on 5th of March until the 8th. It will be a four days three night vacation including the travel time. According to my flight, I will be arriving at 12 noon.

With that
being said
, I would need a settlement
as well
as a transportation arrangement. Kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me a quotation regarding these services. I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Janina
Perez
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IELTS letter Semi-formal You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about prices Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Semi-formal You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about prices Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.