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You have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in Australia for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job,say what else you could do for the family,give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear Ms. Jenifer, I hope you are doing well. My name is Suji. I recently came across your advertisement in local newspaper, that you are looking for someone to teach Tamil for your two children. I find my profile will fit your requirement. To brief about myself, I have prior experience in teaching children in primary and secondary grade when I was in my home country, India. I have recently shifted to Australia and I am currently looking for a similar type of job. Since I am not working now, I can able to adjust my timings based on your preference and I don’t mind to fetch your kids from school after school hours. I have also completed yoga course, so if you are interested I am much delighted to teach it as well for your children. I will be grateful if you consider to offer this job because it will helps me to utilize my time usefully and ofcourse an extra income to run my family. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Suji
Dear Ms. Jenifer,

I hope you are doing well. My name is
Suji
. I recently came across your advertisement in local newspaper, that you are looking for someone to teach Tamil for your two children.

I find my profile will fit your requirement. To brief about myself, I have prior experience in teaching children in primary and secondary grade when I was in my home country, India. I have recently shifted to
Australia and
I am
currently
looking for a similar type of job. Since I am not working
now
, I
can able to
adjust my timings based on your preference and I don’t
mind to fetch
your kids from school after school hours. I have
also
completed yoga course,
so
if you
are interested
I am much delighted to teach it
as well
for your children. I will be grateful if you
consider to offer
this job
because
it will
helps
me to utilize my time
usefully
and
ofcourse
an extra income to run my family.
I
am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Suji
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in Australia for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job, say what else you could do for the family, give your reasons for wanting the job

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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