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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come P3rg
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to let you know that my name is Harmandeep and I live next door at house number 208. Actually, I am planning to hold a small meet and greet party for everyone and have a chance to know each other. There will be a sound system, food to eat, and some alcohol to booze up the party. So, you will be expecting some noise because it will definitely be a bit loud and if it’s okay with you as my neighbour to consider this situation favourably. Let me explain my small get together. I know it is a bit awkward but as a newcomer in this building it will be a great pleasure to know hopefully everyone. I am a very shy person, who can’t even be the first person to talk or bother to come first. This is a huge deal for me, so kindly cooperate. Would you kindly come to this party with your family? I promise it will be over on time and I’ll try not to create chaos with some liquor and music. Thank you for considering this invitation. Hope to see you on the 23rd of this month. Best regards, Harmandeep
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to
let
you
know
that my name is
Harmandeep
and I
live
next
door at
house
number 208. Actually, I am planning to hold a
small
meet
and greet party for everyone and have a chance to
know
each other. There will be a sound system, food to eat, and
some
alcohol to booze up the party.
So
, you will be expecting
some
noise
because
it will definitely be a bit loud and if it’s okay with you as my
neighbour
to consider this situation
favourably
.

Let
me
explain
my
small
get
together. I
know
it is a bit awkward
but
as a newcomer in this building it will be a great pleasure to
know
hopefully
everyone. I am a
very
shy person, who can’t even be the
first
person to talk or bother to
come
first
. This is a huge deal for me,
so
kindly cooperate.

Would you kindly
come
to this party with your family? I promise it will be over on time and I’ll try not to create chaos with
some
liquor and music. Thank you for considering this invitation.

Hope to
see
you on the 23rd of this month.

Best regards,

Harmandeep
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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