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Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You booked a tour package for your family through a travel agent. You had enjoyed the tour very much. Write a letter to the travel agent to thank them. In your letter: Mention the tour you took Describe the things about the tour you & your family liked the best Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.

Read the question below and write a letter. You booked a tour package for your family through a travel agent. You had enjoyed the tour very much. Write a letter to the travel agent to thank them. In your letter: Mention the tour you took Describe the things about the tour you & your family liked the best Also, suggest any improvements to make things better. jp5X
Dear Michael, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to convey my gratitude towards you for arranging such a memorable tour for me and my family to Kerala. We thoroughly enjoyed the trip. Moreover, the arrangements made by you were very soothing for us including the hotels, fooding, transportation. It has been quite a long time since we were planning to visit Kerala, but luckily with your package, we got the chance to explore every bit of Kerala’s beauty. We loved our stay in Munnar, while enjoying the greenery over there. Also, the houseboat stay in Alleppey was our first experience in a houseboat, which was made very comforting by the staff over there, they blessed us with a homely treatment. Apart from this, there is a concern that I would like to share with you, which includes the staff dedicated to us. During the end of our stay, our driver had some personal issues and unfortunately, wasn’t able to continue with being our guide for the rest of the trip. So, for our convenience, he introduced us to one of the replacements. Although, in the beginning, we didn’t face any challenges, until the time we realized that the driver was unable to converse neither in English nor in Hindi. As a result, it became difficult for us to communicate with him. He wasn’t even aware of the routes in the city. He even dropped us to the international airport, and by the time we got acquainted with this, he had left. Moreover, we couldn’t speak to him on the phone, as he didn’t understand any language except the local one. This incident made us a bit unhappy about the tour, as we were almost on the verge of missing the flight. Request you to assure about your staff, and replacements accordingly, and if possible, teaching them with any commonly spoken language can decrease many cases of discomfort to the customers. Thanking you for your lovely services during our stay. ! Yours sincerely,
Dear Michael,

Hope you are doing well.

I am writing this letter to convey my gratitude towards you for arranging such a memorable tour for me and my family to Kerala. We
thoroughly
enjoyed the trip.
Moreover
, the arrangements made by you were
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very
soothing for us including the hotels,
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fooding
, transportation.

It has been quite a long time since we were planning to visit Kerala,
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but
luckily with your package, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the chance to explore every bit of Kerala’s beauty. We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loved
our
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stay
in
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Munnar
, while enjoying the greenery over there.
Also
, the houseboat
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stay
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Alleppey
was our
first
experience in a houseboat, which
was made
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
comforting by the staff over there, they blessed us with a homely treatment.

Apart from this, there is a concern that I would like to share with you, which includes the staff dedicated to us. During the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
, our driver had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
personal issues and unfortunately, wasn’t able to continue with being our guide for the rest of the trip.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, for our convenience, he introduced us to one of the replacements. Although, in the beginning, we didn’t face any challenges, until the time we realized that the driver was unable to converse neither in English nor in Hindi.
As a result
, it became difficult for us to communicate with him. He wasn’t even aware of the routes in the city. He even dropped us to the international airport, and by the time we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
acquainted with this, he had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
.
Moreover
, we couldn’t speak to him on the phone, as he didn’t understand any language except the local one. This incident made us a bit unhappy about the tour, as we were almost on the verge of missing the flight.

Request you to assure about your staff, and replacements
accordingly
, and if possible, teaching them with any
commonly
spoken language can decrease
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
cases of discomfort to the customers.

Thanking you for your lovely services during our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
. !

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Read the question below and write a letter. You booked a tour package for your family through a travel agent. You had enjoyed the tour very much. Write a letter to the travel agent to thank them. In your letter: Mention the tour you took Describe the things about the tour you & your family liked the best Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.

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336 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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