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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. 2Dl6
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to let you know that it would be a great honor to be part of this seminar which will be held in London. To be honest, opportunities like this don’t come and go very often so I would love to participate and since it’s actually related to my job, I will be a perfect fit being in the audience. Let me explain my situation. Our company suggests all the new hired employees to join this program to be more informative or knowledgeable about the firm itself and the duties that we are required to accomplish. This conference is exactly what I need before I start my job. I hope you will consider this matter favourably. Would you kindly provide the details about the seminar in response? I may need to know the location, date, and cost of the program. It will be very helpful when it comes to my flight booking together with the accommodation in London so it will be convenient for my stay. Thank you so much for understanding. Best regards, Harmandeep K. Brar
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to
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you know that it would be a great honor to be part of this seminar which will
be held
in London. To be honest, opportunities like this don’t
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come
and go
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I would
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to participate and since it’s actually related to my job, I will be a
Make sure that the adjective 'perfect' is correct. Possibly, it should be an adverb (typically ~ly) that modifies 'fit'. Possibly, it should be the first word in a compound adjective (hyphenated adjective). Possibly, it is correct.
perfect fit
being in the audience.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation. Our
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company
suggests all the new hired employees to
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join
this program to be more informative or knowledgeable about the firm itself and the duties that we
are required
to accomplish. This conference is exactly what I need
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before
I
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start
my job. I hope you will consider this matter
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favourably
.

Would you kindly provide the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
about the seminar in response? I may need to know the location, date, and cost of the program. It will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
helpful when it
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comes
to my flight booking together with the accommodation in London
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so
it will be convenient for my stay.

Thank you
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so
much for understanding.

Best regards,

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Harmandeep
K.
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Brar
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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