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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. JNKa
Dear Mrs. Gonzales, I am writing to let you know that this is Harmandeep whom you took care of in Saint Paul Hospital. Anyway, I’m feeling better now and thank you so much for being there when I was alone. I respect the assistance in filling all the required formalities or applications and payments. Let me explain my situation now. I merely started walking again. I was really in a terrible condition but you were an incredible angel. I appreciate what you’ve done in the past weeks while I was in the ward room. Actually, my family wants to meet you and cherish all the help. Would you kindly come to my home for brunch? My husband and the kids were so pleased when they saw me breathing since it has been a hectic year for us. I hope you come with your family too, also consider this invitation with love. Thank you so much for your kindness. Best regards, Harmandeep
Dear Mrs. Gonzales,

I am writing to
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let
you know that this is
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Harmandeep
whom you took care of in Saint Paul Hospital. Anyway, I’m feeling better
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now
and thank you
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so
much for being there when I was alone. I respect the assistance in filling all the required formalities or applications and payments.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation
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now
. I
merely
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started
walking again. I was
really
in a terrible condition
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but
you were an incredible angel.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
appreciate what you’ve done in the past weeks while I was in the ward room. Actually, my family wants to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you and cherish all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

Would you kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my home for brunch? My husband and the kids were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
when they
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saw
me breathing since it has been a hectic year for us. I hope you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
with your family too,
also
consider this invitation with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
.

Thank you
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so
much for your kindness.

Best regards,

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Harmandeep

IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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160 words
6.0
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