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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect RryY

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Simu Shah and I am living in Delhi. I just read your article which is printed on international travel magazine. That article contains some example about my city. It mentioned on the article that Delhi has world best Puma branded clothing shop which is situated in Drama city centre shop number is 231 but in actual it is 213. Shop number 231 is the plumbing shop not the clothing shop. There is one letter mistake between 1 and 3. I know about these two shops because I am living just few metres away from these shops. I want you to fix this issue and let everyone know about the exact shop number because it will cause so many problems for the customers who wants to do shopping on that shop due to the wrong information and wrong address of the shop. Thanks and have a nice day Yours Sincerely, Simu Shah

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Possible spelling mistake found.SimsIMUFIMUSAMUSIMSIMC
Simu
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Shah, and
Shah and
 I am living in Delhi. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 read your article which is printed
 on international travel magazine. That article contains This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 example about my city.

It mentioned on the article that Delhi has world best Puma branded clothing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 which is situated
 in Drama city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 number is 231 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in actual it is 213. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
Shop
 number 231 is the plumbing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 not the clothing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. There is one letter mistake between 1 and 3. I know about these two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am living This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 few Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
 away from these shops.

I want you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 this issue and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 everyone know about the exact You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 number This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it will cause This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems for the customers who Did you mean "want"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'customers' should be used.want
wants
 to The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go shopping".go shopping
do shopping
 on that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 due to the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 information and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 address of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. Thanks and have a nice day

Yours Sincerely
, Possible spelling mistake found.SimsIMUFIMUSAMUSIMSIMC
Simu
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphShah.Shah!Shah?Shah:Shah,Shah;
Shah