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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. X1DE

Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to inform you that after taking careful Condersation and determining my all aspect, I will not be able continue my part-time course for sometime because I have a job to do. At the current moment I am not capable of dealing with two things which i am eager to learn one by one I have a full-time job of my dream which i cannot quit. Basically, it's of real estate and mine goal is to start my business in same field and you know that right know I have choosen different field. Another reason of Quiting is lack of time, I don't even get time to sleep properly. Thus, In future we might see each other again, I want to complete my left over work. Once, Real-estate job is done will start which same course because this course is also important for me. Your's Sincerely Ramandeep, Hope to see you soon sir.

Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to inform you that after taking careful Possible spelling mistake found.ConversationCondensation
Condersation
 and determining my all aspect, I will not be The preposition 'to' is required in front of the verb 'continue'.able to continue
able continue
 my part-time course for sometime This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I have a job to do. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 moment I am not capable of dealing with two things which Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am eager to learn one by Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphone.one!one?one:one,one;
one


I have a full-time job of my dream which Did you mean "I"?I
i
 cannot quit. Basically
, it's of real estate and mine goal is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 my business in same field and you know that Did you mean "right now"?right now
right know
 I have Possible spelling mistake found.choosechosenchooseschooserchoose n
choosen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 field. Another reason of Possible spelling mistake found.QuittingQuotingQuiltingSuitingQuietingQuoiting
Quiting
 is lack of time, I don't even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 time to sleep properly
.

Thus
, In future we might This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 each other again, I want to complete my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 over work. Once, Real-estate job is done
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 which same course This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this course is also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for me. Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?YourYours
Your's
Sincerely
Possible spelling mistake found.Amandeep
Ramandeep
, Hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 sir. 