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a friend visiting your city

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Dear Paul, Thanks for your letter. It is so nice to get news about you and your family. It's great that you are going to come to Moscow. I'm looking forward to seeing you and your friends. However, there are so many wonderful sights in our capital that it will be impossible to see them within one week. As for the weather, it's usually cold in Moscow at this time; 10 or maybe 15 degrees below zero. Of course, you should take warm thinks: sweaters, a coat, a cap, gloves and a scarf. As for me, there is nothing new, I study a lot, and sometimes go to the cinema or discos. I haven't been to the theatre for ages. What have you seen in the Globe theatre? Was the performance good? Who played the leading parts? Well, I must finish now. It’s already 11 o’clock. Best wishes, Kate
Dear Paul,

Thanks for your letter. It is
so
nice to
get
news about you and your family.

It's great that you are going to
come
to Moscow. I'm looking forward to seeing you and your friends.
However
, there are
so
many
wonderful sights in our capital that it will be impossible to
see
them within one week. As for the weather, it's
usually
cold
in Moscow at this time; 10 or maybe 15 degrees below zero.
Of course
, you should take warm
thinks
: sweaters, a coat, a cap, gloves and a scarf.

As for me, there is nothing new, I study a lot, and
sometimes
go to the cinema or discos. I haven't been to the
theatre
for ages.

What have you
seen
in the Globe
theatre
? Was the performance
good
? Who played the leading parts?

Well, I
must
finish
now
. It’s already 11 o’clock.

Best wishes,

Kate
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IELTS letter a friend visiting your city

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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