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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. Bnbd
Hello Rajiv, I hope this finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I would like to introduce myself as the one who met with an accident last Friday near Jamia metro station and you could save my life by taking to the hospital at an appropriate time. I am writing to express gratitude since you handled that situation very gracefully. I was travelling for exam that day and was in hurry. A speedy bus invade in a bike which leads to break failure and lost control over the vehicle. I could recall falling on the road and asking for help. You came out to help and saved my life from a major tragedy. I am short of words and not sure how to say thanks for this big help. Some people are like a diamond and they have a lot of respect and love for everyone. I hope, God will always have mercy on you and your family. I am writing to invite you to a small dinner party at my place. My family would like to meet you and would want to say thanks. I am wondering if we can arrange dinner this weekend. Let me know if we can plan it accordingly Yours faithfully, Nisha
Hello Rajiv,

I hope this finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I would like to introduce myself as the one who met with an accident last Friday near
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Jamia
metro station and you could save my life by taking to the hospital at an appropriate time.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing to express gratitude since you handled that situation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
gracefully
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was travelling for exam that day and was in hurry. A speedy bus invade in a bike which leads to break failure and lost control over the vehicle. I could recall falling on the road and asking for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
. You came out to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and saved my life from a major tragedy. I am short of words and not sure how to say thanks for this
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are like a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
diamond and
they have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
respect and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
for everyone. I hope, God will always have mercy on you and your family.

I am writing to invite you to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
dinner party at my place. My family would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you and would want to say thanks. I am wondering if we can arrange dinner this weekend.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know if we can plan it
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
accordingly


Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Nisha

IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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