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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear David, How are you and Elizabeth? Hope this letter finds you well. My name is Nagma and I hail from India, we are a family of 2 and we both work in Wells Fargo Bank. My husband and I have recently shifted in this locality in House no. 4, just next to yours. I'm writing to inform you that we are planning a house warming party which might involve dancing and hence, we are a bit skeptical if you'd be disturbed due to the loud music we might play during the party. We will try our best to keep it low to avoid any nuisance to the families in the neighborhood. The party will start at 1900 hours on coming Saturday, the 6th. We have made arrangements for dinner and drinks for everyone. We have also organised a number of couple games to be played during the celebration. We would love it if you both could join us for the house warming celebration. It will be a good opportunity to know each other better. Looking forward to a positive reply. Take care Nagma
Dear David,

How are you and Elizabeth? Hope this letter finds you well.

My name is
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Nagma
and I hail from India, we are a family of 2 and we both work in Wells Fargo Bank. My husband and I have recently shifted in this locality in
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House
no. 4,
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just
next
to yours.

I'm writing to inform you that we are planning a
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house warming
party which might involve dancing and
hence
, we are a bit skeptical if you'd
be disturbed
due to the loud music we might play during the party. We will try our best to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
it low to avoid any nuisance to the families in the neighborhood.

The party will
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start
at 1900 hours on coming Saturday, the 6th. We have made arrangements for dinner and drinks for everyone. We have
also
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organised
a number of couple games to
be played
during the celebration.

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We
would
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love
it if you both could
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join
us for the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.
house warming
celebration. It will be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
opportunity to know each other better.

Looking forward to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply.

Take care

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Nagma

IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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