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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

Dear David, How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. Although it's such a short time since we last saw each other, it feels much longer. I would first like to introduce myself as the one who met with an accident last week on Roger's street near the metro station and you came just in time for help and took me to the hospital. I'm writing to express my gratitude since you saved my life that day and handled the situation so well. I was travelling to work on my bike when a food truck which was not expected to move, suddenly did. I lost control and hit the truck due to which my leg came under the wheels of the truck. I remember a number of people gathering and you taking the courage of lifting me up and taking me to the hospital. I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for being a savior that day and helping me save my leg. I hope and pray to God that you and your family are always blessed with the choicest of blessings. I'd love to have you and your family over for dinner at my place this coming Saturday, the 6th. Feel free to drop in any time of the day so that we can spend more time and know each other better. My family too would like to meet you and thank you. Let me know about your plan so we can arrange it accordingly. Take care and see you soon. Nagma

Dear David,

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time
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saw
 each other, it feels much longer.

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just
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time
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help
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so
 well.

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I
 was travelling to work on my bike when a food truck which was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
, suddenly
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I
 lost control and hit the truck due to which my leg came under the wheels of the truck. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 remember a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 gathering and A verb seems to be missing. Did you mean “you’re taking”, “you are taking”, or “you were taking”?you're takingyou are takingyou were taking
you taking
 the courage of lifting me up and taking me to the hospital. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for being a savior that day and helping me save my leg. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 hope and pray to God that you and your family are always blessed with the choicest of blessings.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
'd This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to have you and your family over for dinner at my place this coming Saturday, the 6th. Feel free to drop in any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 of the day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can spend more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 and know each other better. My family too would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you and thank you. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know about your plan This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can arrange it accordingly
.

Take care and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

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