Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

write an letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you need this job

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest in your advertisement which was published in a magazine last week. I can live with your family while taking care of your six-year old son. We no longer need to live in our big house as my husband has to go to Singapore for six months. My husband is an engineer by profession and working in a construction company. Last week, his company assigned him a new project for six-months. He will be relocating to Singapore by end of this month. That’s why, I have decided to live with a family for six-months duration. In this way, we will save big amount of money which we had to spent on our house rent. I am a house wife and have four years of work experience in baby-sitting. It would be a great opportunity If I have to look after your six-year old child along with living your family. Which means I will do baby-sit for your child whenever you need and in my spare time, I will do baking. I am an expert in making cup-cakes. I would say, you should also try cupcakes made by me. I must say, I will enjoy while staying with your family. Looking forward to receiving your response. Sincerely, Vijay Luxmi

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in your advertisement which was published
 in a magazine last week. I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with your family while taking care of your six-year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 son.

We no longer need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 as my husband This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 go to Singapore for six months. My husband is an engineer by profession and working in a construction This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Last week, his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 assigned him a new project for six-months. He will be relocating to Singapore by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this month. That’s why, I have decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with a family for six-months duration. In this way, we will save This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 amount of money which we had to spent on our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 rent.

I am a The word “housewife” is normally spelled as one word.housewife
house wife
 and have four years of work experience in baby-sitting. It would be a great opportunity If I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 look after your six-year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 child along with living your family. Which means I will do baby-sit for your child whenever you need and in my spare time, I will do baking. I am an expert in making cup-cakes. I would say, you should also
 try cupcakes made by me.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 say, I will enjoy while staying with your family.

Looking forward to receiving your response.

Sincerely
,

Vijay Possible spelling mistake found.Lux mi
Luxmi