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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.

Dear Mr Saad, I have received your letter yesterday in which you were complaining about some noises that came from my house and it had disturbed your peaceful day. Actually, last week my kitchen cabinet was broken and I tried to fix it with the help of hammer but it produced a lot of noises that all my frantic efforts go in vain. I am deeply apologized to affect your daytime in which you mostly take rest. As you already know, I am unable to do this sort of work during daytime as I have to do a job from 9: 00am to 6: 00pm. After reaching home late, I do not have much time. For that reason, I specially took a day off from my office in order to fix the cabinets. I will definitely hire some expert professional to do this task and instruct him to complete it quickly so that you don't have to suffer much. I hope you will understand my situation and try to cooperate as we are a good neighbor for a longtime. Yours Sincerely, Javeria Shaikh
Dear Mr
Saad
, I have received your letter yesterday in which you were complaining about
some
noises that came from my
house and
it had disturbed your peaceful day.

Actually, last week my kitchen cabinet was
broken and
I tried to
fix
it with the 
help
of hammer
but
it produced
a lot of
noises that all my frantic efforts go in vain.

I am
deeply
apologized to affect your daytime in which you
mostly
take rest. As you already know, I am unable to do this sort of work during daytime as I
have to
do a job from 9: 00am to 6: 00pm. After reaching home late, I do not have much time. For that reason, I
specially
took a day off from my office in order to
fix
the cabinets.

I will definitely hire
some
expert professional to do this task and instruct him to complete it
quickly
so
that you don't
have to
suffer much.

I hope you will understand my situation and try to cooperate as we are a
good
neighbor for
a longtime
.

Yours
Sincerely
,
Javeria
Shaikh
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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