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You are elementary school teacher and live across the school, you want to invite the writer to your school

Dear John, I am working in Mother’s Pride School as an elementary school teacher situated right close to your house. Last week we taught our students your poem and the children were amused after listening your poem. We at our school ensure that students get holistic knowledge of poems so we keep organising some live interactive sessions with esteemed writers like you. Keeping up the same practice, we would like to invite for an interactive session with our kids. It would be great if you could recite the poem first in front of the students and later we can introduce them to the original poem, they will be amazed after realizing that you are the author. Hence, we would like to invite you to our school whole heartedly and hope to see you on this Saturday. Sincerely, Martha Y

Dear John,

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School
 as an elementary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 teacher situated right close to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Last week we taught our students your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrhymepoetrywritingverselyricepic
poem
 and the children were amused
 after listening your poem.

We at our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 ensure that students This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 holistic knowledge of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrhymepoetrywritingverselyricepic
poems
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keep
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 interactive sessions with esteemed writers like you. Keeping up the same practice, we would like to invite for an interactive session with our kids.

It would be great if you could recite the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrhymepoetrywritingverselyricepic
poem
first
 in front of the students and later we can introduce them to the original You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrhymepoetrywritingverselyricepic
poem
, they will be amazed
 after realizing that you are the author. Hence
, we would like to invite you to our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 whole heartedly
 and hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you on this Saturday.

Sincerely
,

Martha

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