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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come 0gl5
Dear Lilly, I am Nancy and hope you are doing well! It's my pleasure to introduce myself as your new neighbour. I am new to London, provide that I moved to this flat last week with my partner. I work as system analyst in a multi-national company. This is to let you know that I have planned to host a housewarming party for my friends on Sunday. We have been planning for dinner and movie night at my place, therefore I was concerned, if that would disturb or create any nuisance to you. we assure you that there will not be any loud noises which causes inconvenience and also please feel free to let me know if you have any issues with this party. I thereby invite you for the party at my home on Sunday. I will be extremely happy, if you find time to drop-in at my place. Looking forward in meeting you on Sunday, Yours Sincerely, Nancy
Dear Lilly,

I am Nancy and hope you are doing well! It's my pleasure to introduce myself as your new
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neighbour
. I am new to London, provide that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to this flat last week with my partner. I work as system analyst in a multi-national
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. This is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I have planned to host a housewarming party for my friends on Sunday.

We have been planning for dinner and movie night at my place,
therefore
I
was concerned
, if that would disturb or create any nuisance to you.
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we
assure you that there will not be any loud noises which causes inconvenience and
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
feel free to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if you have any issues with this party. I thereby invite you for the party at my home on Sunday. I will be
extremely
happy, if you find time to drop-in at my place.

Looking forward in meeting you on Sunday,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Nancy
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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