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letter to editor of the magazine

letter to editor of the magazine JEwa

Dear Sir or Mam, I was going through your magzine of jan 2021 edition and found out something which could rendered incorrect information to reader. You have written that pithoragarh, which is my hometown, is 50 kilometers away from nainital. However, it is 150 Kilometers away from there. It may seem like a really small issue but let me explain why this is so important. There is a bridge before entering my hometown which closes down at 8 pm and no travellers are allowed to cross that bridge until 5am. If a tourist or traveller coming for the first time they might plan there trip according to 50 KM strech & hope they could cover distance by 8, which will not happen because of thw wrong info they have. Also to point out, this area is covered with dense forests & wild animals like tigers can be seen roaming around at night. this could be quiet dangerous to stay whole night at such place.

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