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you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a school centre that you visit write a letter to the manager what the problem is how you feel about the problem what steps you want the manager to take

you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a school centre that you visit write a letter to the manager what the problem is how you feel about the problem what steps you want the manager to take WPqK
Dear sir madam, My name is Archana Babu I am writing this letter to inform you about a inadequate I'm amenities in the changing room of your sports centre. I am a permanent member of your sports club. Firstly, the number of dressing room is not enough for the customers especially in the peak time we have to queue inside the room. Kaun si kundli 1 make delay of starting events. Secondly, hygiene of the bathroom condition is terrific the reason no adequate facilities in the pressure area. Therefore people are going to other sports centre so I feel that it is inherent to notice you. these are the serious issues and that affect the reduce our team members. Hence advocate number of rooms and make a one or two star for daily cleaning purpose for stop it will reduce awkwardnessof your passport centre and increase good reputation in the position in the society. I looking forward to you a good changes in the future. Yours faithfully, Babu
Dear sir madam, My name is
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Archana
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Babu
I am writing this letter to inform you about
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a
inadequate I'm amenities in the changing
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room
of your sports
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centre
. I am a permanent member of your sports club.
Firstly
, the number of dressing
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room
is not
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enough
for the customers
especially
in the peak time we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
queue inside the
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room
.
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Kaun
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si
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kundli
1
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make
delay of starting
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events
.
Secondly
, hygiene of the bathroom condition is terrific the reason no adequate facilities in the pressure area.
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Therefore
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people
are going to other sports centre
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so
I feel that it is inherent to notice you.
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these
are the serious issues and that affect the
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reduce
our team members.
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Hence
advocate number of
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rooms
and
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make
a one or two star for daily cleaning purpose for
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stop
it will
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reduce
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awkwardnessof
your passport
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centre
and increase
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good
reputation in the position in the society.
Did you mean "I'm looking", "I am looking", or "I was looking"?
I looking
forward to you a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in the future. Yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Babu

IELTS letter you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a school centre that you visit write a letter to the manager what the problem is how you feel about the problem what steps you want the manager to take

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  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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