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Apologise letter to my director.

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Dear Mr. Smith. I am writing to apologise for my irresponsibility for my duty. Please accept my sincerest apologies for my overdue on time at work. That day morning, which I was late for work, my daughter was ill with high temperature. I needed to take her to the doctor immediately. Unfortunately, the hospital far away from my flat and then I got there by taxi, because my husband was on duty the night before. I hardly got the hospital, doctors and nurses gave my daughter all necessaries. After that, she felt herself good and we came back to home. Then, I looked my watch and saw it was almost 8 o'clock, I run for my work, as you saw, indifferent I was late. I was sorry for not calling you, I forgot it. Once again, sincerest apologies for my fault. I will promise you, if I have a situation like this, I will inform at that moment. Yours sincerely. Mrs. Simpson
Dear Mr. Smith. I am writing to
apologise
for my irresponsibility for my duty.
Please
accept my sincerest apologies for my overdue on time at work. That day morning, which I was late for work, my daughter was ill with high temperature. I needed to take her to the doctor immediately. Unfortunately, the hospital far away from my flat and then I
got
there by taxi,
because
my husband was on duty the night
before
. I hardly
got
the hospital, doctors and nurses gave my daughter all necessaries. After that, she felt herself
good and
we came back to home. Then, I looked my
watch
and
saw
it was almost 8 o'clock, I run for my work, as you
saw
, indifferent I was late. I was sorry for not calling you, I forgot it. Once again,
sincerest
apologies for my fault. I will promise you, if I have a situation like this, I will inform at that moment. Yours
sincerely
. Mrs. Simpson
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IELTS letter Apologise letter to my director.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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