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You have just missed your friends party. Write to apologize for it

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Dear friend Anora, I am writing to you to apologize for missing your party. First of all I should regard that I looked forward to visiting you at your birthday party. Unfortunately my English exam also was fixed to that date, at that moment. it was impossible to change the time of the test. I was very sorry to be informed that, but I had no chance. Because it was very important for me. Now I hope you will understand my situation and accept my sincerest apologies. If you don't mind, I invite you to watch a movie in the cinema tomorrow evening. I have booked a couple of tickets for us. Please accept my apologies, my dearest! I am sure you have positive response for me. Best regards, David
Dear friend
Anora
, I am writing to you to apologize for missing your party.
First of all
I should regard that I looked forward to visiting you at your birthday party. Unfortunately my English exam
also
was
fixed
to that date, at that moment.
it
was impossible to
change
the time of the
test
. I was
very
sorry to
be informed
that,
but
I had no chance.
Because
it was
very
important
for me.
Now
I hope you will understand my situation and accept my sincerest apologies. If you don't mind, I invite you to
watch
a movie in the cinema tomorrow evening. I have booked a couple of tickets for us.
Please
accept my apologies, my dearest! I am sure you have
positive
response for me. Best regards,
David
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IELTS letter You have just missed your friends party. Write to apologize for it

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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