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You have just missed your friends party. Write to apologize for it

You have just missed your friends party. Write to apologize for it jdRpN

Dear friend Anora, I am writing to you to apologize for missing your party. First of all I should regard that I looked forward to visiting you at your birthday party. Unfortunately my English exam also was fixed to that date, at that moment. it was impossible to change the time of the test. I was very sorry to be informed that, but I had no chance. Because it was very important for me. Now I hope you will understand my situation and accept my sincerest apologies. If you don't mind, I invite you to watch a movie in the cinema tomorrow evening. I have booked a couple of tickets for us. Please accept my apologies, my dearest! I am sure you have positive response for me. Best regards, David

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