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Apologise letter to my friend

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I am writing apologise to you for my fault. Yesterday was your birthday party. You invited me your party. Unfortunately I did not go to in your house. Two days ago I drunk cold Cola so my health was not good. I had a sore throat and temperature. I was in my bed since two days. Doctor said me drink hot milk two times in a day. So I drink it in the morning and in the evening. I promise to you certainly I will go next birthday party. Please accept my apologise letter. Your sincerely. Nafisa Abdullayeva.
I am writing
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apologise
to you for my fault. Yesterday was your birthday party. You invited me your party. Unfortunately I did not go to in your
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house
. Two days ago I
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drunk
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cold
Cola
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so
my health was not
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good
. I had a sore throat and temperature. I was in my bed
Did you mean "for"? ('since' refers to a point in time, whereas 'for' refers to a period)
since
two days. Doctor
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said
me drink hot milk two times in a day.
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So
I drink it in the morning and in the evening. I promise to you
certainly
I will go
next
birthday party.
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Please
accept my
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apologise
letter. Your
sincerely
.
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Nafisa
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Abdullayeva
.
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IELTS letter Apologise letter to my friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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