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You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  say how you heard the news  arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house  explain what you will bring with you

Dear XYZ, Congratulations John! Your long time wish to get married to Julia has finally turned into reality. Last week Yash informed me about your wedding while I was on a phone call with him. I was extremely happy and excited after hearing about your marriage with Julia. Believe me you will enjoy every bit of your married life. It is full of fun and excitement. It’s been a long time since we have chilled at your place. If I am not wrong last time we hanged out together was during last Christmas. I was wandering if in the first week of January you and Julia are free so that I could come and visit you guys. Any day of the week for lunch sounds good right? Would that suit you guys? Last month I happened to visit France for business purpose. I brought some authentic French Wine and cookies along with me. I would love to bring some of that with me for the lunch, I know you are passionate about authentic wines especially European wines. I would also bring some home cooked Pasta. I am sure you might be missing the White sauce pasta cooked by my mom. Hope to see you in the coming week. Best Wishes Nipun
Dear XYZ,

Congratulations John! Your long time wish to
get
married to Julia has
finally
turned into reality.

Last week Yash informed me about your wedding while I was on a phone call with him. I was
extremely
happy and excited after hearing about your marriage with Julia. Believe me you will enjoy every bit of your married life. It is full of fun and excitement.

It’s been a long time since we have chilled at your place. If I am not
wrong
last time we hanged out together was during last Christmas. I was wandering if in the
first
week of January you and Julia are free
so
that I could
come
and visit you guys. Any day of the week for lunch sounds
good
right? Would that suit you guys?

Last month I happened to visit France for business purpose. I brought
some
authentic French Wine and cookies along with me. I would
love
to bring
some
of that with me for the lunch, I know you are passionate about authentic wines
especially
European wines. I would
also
bring
some
home cooked Pasta. I am sure you might be missing the White sauce pasta cooked by my mom.

Hope to
see
you in the coming week.

Best Wishes

Nipun
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IELTS letter You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  say how you heard the news  arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house  explain what you will bring with you

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
210 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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