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You have decided to look for a new job. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain why are you looking for new job.2. Describe he kind of job you would ur to have 3. Ask your friend to help you to find a new job

You have decided to look for a new job. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain why are you looking for new job. 2. Describe he kind of job you would ur to have 3. Ask your friend to help you to find a new job gEQ7
Dear Amruta, I want to let you know that I have decided to seek new employment. I am looking for better opportunities as my work is no longer challenging and I am hoping that you can help me. I have been working as as Assistant Manager at a local restaurant in my city. When I joined, three years ago, I had very little experience and there were many new things to learn. However, it has become monotonous for me now. The growth opportunities are also very limited as it is a small hotel. I would like to find more challenging position at a larger hotel. I am looking for full time employment as as Associate Manager at a bigger hotel like Taj. I would prefer a permanent position rather than contractual. I am also open to relocate. I hope, you shall not mind to help me for my job hunt. Perhaps, you can forward my resume to the human resources department, since you are already working with Taj group of hotel. This would increase my chance of getting selected for the post. I really appreciate your help and suggestion you might have for me as you have many years of experience and contacts in big hotels. Your's truly, Anushree
Dear
Amruta
, I want to
let
you know that I have decided to seek new employment. I am looking for better opportunities as my work is no longer
challenging and
I am hoping that you can
help
me.

I have been working
as as
Assistant Manager at a local restaurant in my city. When I
joined
, three years ago, I had
very
little
experience and there were
many
new things to learn.
However
, it has become monotonous for me
now
. The growth opportunities are
also
very
limited as it is a
small
hotel.

I would like to find more challenging position at a larger hotel. I am looking for full time employment
as as
Associate Manager at a bigger hotel like
Taj
.
I
would prefer a permanent position
rather
than contractual.
I
am
also
open to relocate.

I
hope, you shall not mind to
help
me for my job hunt. Perhaps, you can forward my resume to the human resources department, since you are already working with
Taj
group of hotel. This would increase my chance of getting selected for the post.

I
really
appreciate your
help
and suggestion you might have for me as you have
many
years of experience and contacts in
big
hotels.

Your's
truly
,
Anushree
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IELTS letter You have decided to look for a new job. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain why are you looking for new job. 2. Describe he kind of job you would ur to have 3. Ask your friend to help you to find a new job

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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