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You have just been qualified for a position in a company.

You have just been qualified for a position in a company. XnRM8
Dear Mr. Bob, I am pleased to inform you that I will accept the Front-End developer position you have offered. Thank you for choosing me. I will follow up with a phone call to discuss other issues related to the job, including when you will need me to start, salary, and accomodations while I am relocating. Please keep in mind that I will need adequate time to resign from my current job. As I mentioned before I have been working there for quite a long time and I definitely have to take care of a few issues before leaving. I am interested in starting at your company and I look forward to talking to you again. If you need to contact me for any reason, please feel free to call me or send me an email. I would like to thank you again for your offer and I hope to have great cooperation with your company. Yours sincerely, Lazizjon
Dear Mr. Bob,

I am
pleased
to inform you that I will accept the Front-
End
developer position you have offered. Thank you for choosing me.

I will follow up with a phone call to discuss other issues related to the job, including when you will need me to
start
, salary, and
accomodations
while I am relocating.
Please
keep
in mind that I will need adequate time to resign from my
current
job. As I mentioned
before
I have been working there for quite a long time and I definitely
have to
take care of a few issues
before
leaving.

I
am interested
in starting at your
company
and I look forward to talking to you again. If you need to contact me for any reason,
please
feel free to call me or
send me an email
.

I would like to thank you again for your offer and I hope to have great cooperation with your
company
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Lazizjon
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IELTS letter You have just been qualified for a position in a company.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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