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You are participating an educational program. But you have some misunderstanding about your participation in lessons during the program.Ask detailed information about your position in the program.Write letter for administrator of the program.introduce yourself,explain the problem,say what you would like the administrator to do

You are participating an educational program. But you have some misunderstanding about your participation in lessons during the program. Ask detailed information about your position in the program. Write letter for administrator of the program. introduce yourself, explain the problem, say what you would like the administrator to do k6nrW
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask for more information about my participation in trainings that are conducting in the the centers of regions in Uzbekistan. I am Dilfuza Nazarova Abdubannopovna and have been selected as a finalist for Cohort II RPM in ESN: STT program. I have provided my personal information and Term and Conditions in April. But now I have a misunderstanding that related to my participation because I have received a notice letter by American Councils recently. They informed me about data exposure and some problems in AIS database. But I could not realize the main problem. According to that I am worrying about my position in the program. I would be grateful if you could provide me with detailed information about my participation in trainings. I look forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Dilfuza Nazarova.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
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ask for
more information about my participation in trainings that are conducting in
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the the
centers of regions in Uzbekistan.

I am
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Dilfuza
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Nazarova
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Abdubannopovna
and have
been selected
as a finalist for Cohort II RPM in ESN: STT program.
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I
have provided my personal information and Term and Conditions in April.

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But
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now
I have a misunderstanding that related to my participation
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because
I have received a notice letter by American Councils recently. They informed me about data exposure and
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some
problems in AIS database.
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But
I could not realize the main problem.

According to that I am worrying about my position in the program.

I would be grateful if you could provide me with detailed information about my participation in trainings.

I look forward to your early reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Dilfuza
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Nazarova
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IELTS letter You are participating an educational program. But you have some misunderstanding about your participation in lessons during the program. Ask detailed information about your position in the program. Write letter for administrator of the program. introduce yourself, explain the problem, say what you would like the administrator to do

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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