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Complain letter about learning center

Complain letter about learning center 0nbQO
DEAR SIR OR MADAM, I AM WRITING TO EXPRESS MY DISSATISFACTION WITH YOUR LEARNING CENTER. I was a new student in your learning center. I have been been learning English for four weeks. Unwittingly, your learning center is not so good as you said in the advertisement. I am writing to let you know that your one English teacher every time come late, she explained the lessons very touch, on top of that, during the lesson she sometimes feel her self out of element. At the beginning of my course l have a lot of teething problems, on the contrary l cannot understand the main topic of the lesson. Your worker come late for 30 minutes. Our lesson is starting at 15. 00. pm and finishing at 16. 000 pm, in fact the lesson must start at 14. 30. pm so English teacher come to. I think teachers should always be tactless. However, you said that she work at a very -well endowed lyceum but no one believe for this. In that case, . my classmates are also play up during the lessons. I consider that you should solve this problems. On the other hand, I meet untoward problems, so you will bach my money for the lessons which l paid for you or I will join for another group. Regret to inform you about these but consequently, I don't want online course, cause l am jaded with online lessons. I have particular about choosing teachers. Please dwell on with my problems and I hope that this information will be useful. Please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Georgina.
DEAR SIR OR MADAM,

I AM WRITING TO EXPRESS MY DISSATISFACTION WITH YOUR
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LEARNING
CENTER. I was a new student in your
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learning
center.
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I
have
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been been
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learning
English for four weeks.
Unwittingly
, your
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learning
center is not
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so
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good
as you said in the advertisement.

I am writing to
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let
you know that your one English teacher every time
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come
late, she
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explained
the
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lessons
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very
touch,
on top of that
, during the
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lesson
she
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sometimes
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feel
her self out of element. At the beginning of my course l have
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a lot of
teething problems,
on the contrary
l cannot understand the main topic of the
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lesson
. Your worker
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come
late for 30 minutes. Our
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lesson
is starting at 15. 00. pm and finishing at 16. 000 pm, in fact the
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lesson
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must
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start
at 14. 30. pm
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so
English teacher
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come
to. I
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think
teachers should always be tactless.
However
, you said that she work at a
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very
-well endowed lyceum
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but
no one believe for this.
In that case
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, .
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my
classmates are
also
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play
up during the
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lessons
. I consider that you should solve
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this
problems.

On the other hand
, I
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meet
untoward problems,
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so
you will
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bach
my money for the
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lessons
which l paid for you or I will
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join
for another group. Regret to inform you about these
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but
consequently
, I don't want online course, cause l
am jaded
with online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lessons
. I have particular about choosing teachers.

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Please
dwell on with my problems and I hope that this information will be useful.

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Please
do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours
sincerely
, Georgina.
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IELTS letter Complain letter about learning center

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  American English
7 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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