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Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, explain why you are having trouble sleeping ask them to lower their noise level explain to them that you have contacted the landlord

Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, explain why you are having trouble sleeping ask them to lower their noise level explain to them that you have contacted the landlord RkKN8
Dear Sunny I hope this letter finds you well, I am writing this letter to bring your attention to let you know about the noises that comes from your home is causing me a problem. In fact, its bothers me a lot that I feel that I must contact you. I usually spend my whole day at office and whenever I came back the first thing I have heard a loud noise of music player from your home. I can understand pretty well you people are going through your teenage and at that point of age you cannot understand the things which may impact others life. I only get time to talk to my family when I get back home after busy schedule at workplace that sound comes from your place disturbs me more, neither I can't speak perfectly with my parents or focus on my reading which I am doing before going to sleep. I would request you to let shut down your stereo's voice or it's level. Also, I have contacted your landlords about the same, they told me to talk with you guys. Hoping for your cooperation. Sincerely Mandeep Kaur
Dear Sunny

I hope this letter finds you well,

I am writing this letter to bring your attention to
let
you know about the noises that
comes
from your home is causing me a problem. In fact, its bothers me a lot that I feel that I
must
contact you. I
usually
spend my whole day at office and whenever I came back the
first
thing I have heard a loud noise of music player from your home.

I can understand pretty well you
people
are going through your teenage and at that point of age you cannot understand the things which may impact others life.
I
only
get
time to talk to my family when I
get
back home after busy schedule at workplace that sound
comes
from your place disturbs me more, neither I can't speak
perfectly
with my parents or focus on my reading which I am doing
before
going to sleep.
I
would request you to
let
shut down your stereo's voice or it's level.

Also
, I have contacted your landlords about the same, they
told
me to talk with you guys.

Hoping for your cooperation.

Sincerely


Mandeep
Kaur
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, explain why you are having trouble sleeping ask them to lower their noise level explain to them that you have contacted the landlord

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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