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You live in a USA and your family has a spare room to rent out toa student. Write a letter to accommodation affair of the university of America.

You live in a USA and your family has a spare room to rent out toa student. Write a letter to accommodation affair of the university of America. 0ngkn
My name is navdeep kaur. I am mathematics major student in your university. I will give a room on rent in your university student. so, I need your help regarding this. Firstly, apartment has three room but one room is completely vacant. Room is spic and spine and fully furnished. Moreover, you have not faced any problem such as, room is fully air- conditioning, heater also install in bathroom. furthermore, the wall of the room has painted. Lastly electronic cooker and internet facilities are available. Moving towards my further point tenant has the well behaved. second is that occupier came home on time before 7pm. Next is that night parities and loud sound not allowed at home. We are four members in my family including me. Now I am talking about rent who pay the 45 dollar per month. I am looking for someone who is serious about the study and has a good academic track, whose are pleasure to call me this number+54682216625. Thank you I am waiting your prompt reply Your faithfully, Navdeep kaur
My name is
navdeep
kaur
. I am mathematics major student in your university. I will give a
room
on rent in your university student.
so
, I need your
help
regarding this.

Firstly
, apartment has three
room
but
one
room
is completely vacant.
Room
is
spic
and spine and
fully
furnished.
Moreover
, you have not faced any problem such as,
room
is
fully
air- conditioning, heater
also
install in bathroom.
furthermore
, the wall of the
room
has painted.
Lastly
electronic cooker and internet facilities are available.

Moving towards my
further
point tenant has the
well behaved
.
second
is that occupier came home on time
before
7pm.
Next
is that night parities and loud sound not
allowed
at home.

We are four members in my family including me.
Now
I am talking about rent who pay the 45 dollar per month. I am looking for someone who is serious about the study and has a
good
academic
track
, whose are pleasure to call me this number+54682216625. Thank
you


I am
waiting your prompt reply


Your
faithfully
,

Navdeep
kaur
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IELTS letter You live in a USA and your family has a spare room to rent out toa student. Write a letter to accommodation affair of the university of America.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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