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You are looking for a part time job in your summer holiday.You should write an aplication letter summer camp headmaster.

You are looking for a part time job in your summer holiday. You should write an aplication letter summer camp headmaster. p5x5m

I am looking for a part time job as an english teacher in your summer camp which I saw advertised in Monday's edition of the Darakchi. I am thirty five years old and obtained a degree in foreign language faculty in Andijan State Pedogogical Institute of languages in 2008. I feel I have many of important qualifications needed for this position. I am currently teaching secondary school N 3where I have been working for the last 14years. In addition I participated computer course. I consider myself to be punctual, hardworking and fair. I am currently looking for a job that will allow me to develop my skills and experiences. In my free time, I learn foreign language such as Korean and Russian. I enjoy several outdoor activities: cooking delicious meals and sewing dresses. I am sociable and I can get on with new people easily. I enclose my reference from my present employer. I consider that I am well suited this position and I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully Hillary Dalton.

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part time
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english
 teacher in your summer camp which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
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Darakchi
. I am This word is normally spelled with hyphen.thirty-five
thirty five
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old
 and obtained a degree in foreign language faculty in Possible spelling mistake found.IndianAndeanAndamanAbidjanAndiron
Andijan
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Pedogogical
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I
 feel I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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I
 am currently
 teaching secondary school N 3where I have been working for the last 14years. In The comma is probably missing here: "addition, I".addition, I
addition I
 participated computer course. I consider myself to be punctual, hardworking and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
. I am currently
 looking for a job that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to develop my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and experiences. In my free time, I learn foreign language such as Korean and Russian. I enjoy several outdoor activities: cooking delicious meals and sewing dresses. I am sociable and I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on with new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
easily
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 enclose my reference from my present employer. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 consider that I am well suited this position and I would be grateful if you would consider my application. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully
 Hillary Dalton. 