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You are looking for a part time job in your summer holiday.You should write an aplication letter summer camp headmaster.

You are looking for a part time job in your summer holiday. You should write an aplication letter summer camp headmaster. p5x5m
I am looking for a part time job as an english teacher in your summer camp which I saw advertised in Monday's edition of the Darakchi. I am thirty five years old and obtained a degree in foreign language faculty in Andijan State Pedogogical Institute of languages in 2008. I feel I have many of important qualifications needed for this position. I am currently teaching secondary school N 3where I have been working for the last 14years. In addition I participated computer course. I consider myself to be punctual, hardworking and fair. I am currently looking for a job that will allow me to develop my skills and experiences. In my free time, I learn foreign language such as Korean and Russian. I enjoy several outdoor activities: cooking delicious meals and sewing dresses. I am sociable and I can get on with new people easily. I enclose my reference from my present employer. I consider that I am well suited this position and I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully Hillary Dalton.
I am looking for a
part time
job as an
english
teacher in your summer camp which I
saw
advertised in Monday's edition of the
Darakchi
. I am
thirty five
years
old
and obtained a degree in foreign language faculty in
Andijan
State
Pedogogical
Institute of languages in 2008.
I
feel I have
many
of
important
qualifications needed for this position.
I
am
currently
teaching secondary school N 3where I have been working for the last 14years. In
addition I
participated computer course. I consider myself to be punctual, hardworking and
fair
. I am
currently
looking for a job that will
allow
me to develop my
skills
and experiences. In my free time, I learn foreign language such as Korean and Russian. I enjoy several outdoor activities: cooking delicious meals and sewing dresses. I am sociable and I can
get
on with new
people
easily
.
I
enclose my reference from my present employer.
I
consider that I am well suited this position and I would be grateful if you would consider my application.
I
look forward to hearing from you. Your
faithfully
Hillary Dalton.
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IELTS letter You are looking for a part time job in your summer holiday. You should write an aplication letter summer camp headmaster.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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