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Instruction letter to a friend

Instruction letter to a friend Ele5r
Dear Giuseph, Thank you for accepting to look after my house and pet while I am on holidays. Please find below some key information that you should know. If you need anything or any incident happens, you can contact my relatives. The cellphone number of my mother is 204-788-5674 and my sister is 204-678-3542. They are willing to help you when possible. There are couple details you should be aware of when caring my pet. On the fridge, there is my pet's nutritious schedule in which is included instructions for changing the arena and clean its pot. Furthermore, it shows the times that are the best to take him out for a walk. In addition, there are some house duties to take carefully into account. Since I will be on holidays for a week, you would need to open and close my garage once and a while so that it is on use. Moreover, vacuum the rooms twice a week to keep clean. Once again, thank you so much for accepting my offer. Do not hesitate to contact me if you feel like to. Yours truly, Jiruo
Dear
Giuseph
, Thank you for accepting to look after my
house
and pet while I am on holidays.
Please
find below
some
key information that you should know. If you need anything or any incident happens, you can contact my relatives. The cellphone number of my mother is 204-788-5674 and my sister is 204-678-3542. They are willing to
help
you when possible. There are couple
details
you should be aware of when caring my pet. On the fridge, there is my pet's nutritious schedule in which
is included
instructions for changing the arena and clean its pot.
Furthermore
, it
shows
the times that are the best to take him out for a walk.
In addition
, there are
some
house
duties to take
carefully
into account. Since I will be on holidays for a week, you would need to open and close my garage
once and a while
so
that it is on
use
.
Moreover
, vacuum the rooms twice a week to
keep
clean. Once again, thank you
so
much for accepting my offer. Do not hesitate to contact me if you feel like to.

Yours
truly
,

Jiruo
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IELTS letter Instruction letter to a friend

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
186 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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