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You have just arrived in foreign country on a businnes trip. You faced a problem at the airport.

You have just arrived in foreign country on a businnes trip. You faced a problem at the airport. NM8yj
Dear Madam, I am Alina Granger and I apply for the airport. On July 22, 2021, I went to the business trip to New York on 7 flight. Unfourtenly I hava faced some problems on tge flight and airport. I am sorry to inform you that there's servise wasn't good and flight was terrible. I was shocked at seats were hard and made unconvinients to on the flying. Nitbonly these and stewardesses are rude and impolite. I have suggest that you should make better your servises. Also I lost my lugagge I couldn't found them after the flight and called to managment and they found my luggages after long times about two days. Please make better your serves. I hope you will resolve the problems. Yours faithfully, Alina Granger.
Dear Madam, I am Alina Granger and I apply for the airport. On July 22, 2021, I went to the business trip to New York on 7
flight
.
Unfourtenly
I
hava
faced
some
problems on
tge
flight
and airport. I am sorry to inform you that there's
servise
wasn't
good
and
flight
was terrible. I
was shocked
at seats were
hard
and made
unconvinients
to on the flying.
Nitbonly
these and stewardesses are rude and impolite. I have
suggest
that you should
make
better your
servises
.
Also
I lost my
lugagge
I couldn't found them after the
flight
and called to
managment and
they found my
luggages
after long times about two days.
Please
make
better your serves. I hope you will resolve the problems. Yours
faithfully
, Alina Granger.
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IELTS letter You have just arrived in foreign country on a businnes trip. You faced a problem at the airport.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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