Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You have bought an airline ticket, but for some reason you will not be able to travel on the day schedule.

You have bought an airline ticket, but for some reason you will not be able to travel on the day schedule. PWMk2
Dear Sir On July 24, 2021, I bought a ticket to fly to France. When I arrived at the airport, the ticket time was changed to July 27th. I had a meeting with the company manager on July 26th. If I do not fly in time the meeting will be canceled because I have all the documents. Bought a ticket for that day to deliver me. These documents are also useful for you because all documents are signed for extension. I can not stay here for one day. I want you to give me a private plane. They told me to contact you if I told this wish to your employee so I appealed to you. I hope you will look into the metter and give me an immediate reply. Yours faithfully. Larry Smith.
Dear Sir On July 24, 2021, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a ticket to
fly
to France. When I arrived at the airport, the ticket time was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to July 27th. I had a meeting with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
manager on July 26th. If I do not
fly
in time the meeting will
be canceled
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I have all the documents.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Bought
a ticket for that day to deliver me. These documents are
also
useful for you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
all documents
are signed
for extension. I can not stay here for one day. I want you to give me a private
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plane
. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me to contact you if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
this wish to your employee
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I appealed to you. I hope you will look into the
Possible spelling mistake found.
metter
and give me an immediate reply. Yours
faithfully
. Larry Smith.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You have bought an airline ticket, but for some reason you will not be able to travel on the day schedule.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • You have bought an airline ticket, but for some reason you will not be able to travel on the day schedule.