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There will be a tradition celebration in yoyr country and you want to invite your friend form Englush-speaking country

There will be a tradition celebration in yoyr country and you want to invite your friend form Englush-speaking country eK3AK
Dear Mary, I am very glad to know that you are to take part in international cooking competition in New York. I sincerely invite you to come to our traditional holiday Navroz to see us after the competition. I sure this year contradistinguish from othes years holidays and it is congratulate in 21th march. In this holiday all people try to do goodnesses and all public take care of illnesses and have a lot of fun. In this party all belligerents befit each other. And the most improtant thing that we make all traditional meals like kok manti, xonim and others. The most lovely food in Navroz is sumalak which is cooked in big dish with a lot of people. And according to our legends when you are fixing the sumalak you tell a wish and it will become truth. And thus holiday is our religional New Year. I find it is important you be here with me and you can learn our some traditional dishes. Before you come please give me a call. Our telephone number remains the same, but I think I had better tell you once more. It is 998979856266. I will welcomebyou at the airport. Please do come. We look forward to your arrival. All the best, Alina Granger.
Dear Mary, I am
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take part
in international cooking competition in New York. I
sincerely
invite you to
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come
to our traditional
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holiday
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Navroz
to
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see
us after the competition. I sure
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this year contradistinguish
from
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years
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holidays
and it is
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21th
march. In this
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holiday
all
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people
try to do
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goodnesses
and all public take care of illnesses and have
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a lot of
fun. In this party all belligerents befit each other. And the most
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improtant
thing that we
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make
all traditional meals like
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kok
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manti
,
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xonim
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and others
. The most lovely food in
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Navroz
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sumalak
which
is cooked
in
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big
dish with
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a lot of
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people
. And according to our legends when you are fixing the
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sumalak
you
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tell
a wish and it will become truth. And
thus
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holiday
is our
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religional
New Year. I find it is
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important
you be here with me and you can learn our
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some
traditional dishes.
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Before
you
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come
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please
give me a call. Our telephone number remains the same,
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but
I
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think
I had better
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tell
you once more. It is 998979856266. I will
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welcomebyou
at the airport.
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do
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come
. We look forward to your arrival. All the best, Alina Granger.
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IELTS letter There will be a tradition celebration in yoyr country and you want to invite your friend form Englush-speaking country

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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