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Write a request letter your friend about London

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Dear Mrs Johnson, I am writing to inquire about London where you went to University. Because I want to go on a trip there next month and know about the city of London. Firstly, I want to stay in a comfortable hotel close to the city centre at a reasonable price. I wonder if you could give me information about the convenient places to spend the night, hotel locations, prices and amenities. Secondly, I am keen on history. It would be interested to know how evening entertainment is and what types of cultural places. I hope you can help me with these details. Thank you in advance your help. Yours sincerely, Emma Watson
Dear Mrs Johnson, I am writing to inquire about London where you went to University.
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Because
I want to go on a trip there
next
month and know about the
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city of London
.
Firstly
, I want to stay in a comfortable hotel close to the city
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centre
at a reasonable price. I wonder if you could give me information about the convenient places to spend the night, hotel locations, prices and amenities.
Secondly
, I am keen on history. It would
be interested
to know how evening entertainment is and what types of cultural places. I hope you can
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help
me with these
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details
. Thank you in advance your
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help
. Yours
sincerely
, Emma
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Watson
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IELTS letter Write a request letter your friend about London

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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