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Informal letter - Giving advice/Travelling

Informal letter - Giving advice/Travelling JYVDD

Dear Nikki, It is great to receive your letter. I’m happy to know that you will be traveling to my country for a month. I’m writing to tell you where you should go and what you should see. As you know, VietNam is a very beautiful place. The first place you should visit is Sa Pa. This is a beautiful place with steep, sharp mountains, deep, green valleys and terraced rice fields. And a special thing is that you will meet a lot of ethnic minorities here. You should also visit DaLat. It’s a fascinating city in the mountains with Xuan Huong Lake, CamLy Waterfall, etc. and There are a lot of farms with different kinds of colorful flowers. The next place you should visit is Nha Trang. It is the gem of Vietnam’s central region with white sand beaches and shimmering turquoise waters. You can go swimming in the clear clean seawater, watch the sunrise and walk along the beach in the early morning. It's really awesome. There are many other attractive places for you to visit in my country. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes,

Dear Nikki,

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.

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clear
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watch
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes, 